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Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

A.Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering

B.Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

C.Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886 and outnumbering

D.Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering

E.Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

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大致理解意思，即：Emily Dickinson给他的sister in law写的信是outnumber(远远超过) to anyone else. 　　A选项，outnumbering不对。outnumbering her letters to anyone else中的outnumber不是与谓语动词were wirtten同时发生的动作。所以不是第一种情况，也不是表示整个句子的结果。所以不能用分词形式放在句尾。出现了时间断层，不能表伴随。 B选项是一个平行的问题，请看题目标注begins和ended不平行;outnumber 和 were written 没有连词连接，使得outnumber显得很多余。 C：成分残缺，无主动词; 选项还不平行beginning 和 that ends ; D成分残缺，无主动词 ;ending 和beginning 无连词连接，结构混乱，;outnumbering错误的和beginning 和ending 并列修饰period.逻辑不合理。 E:bingo :关于时间的信息很好的包含在两个分词修饰语中，并且修饰语用逗号隔开，结构清晰